He seemed to be struggling, the power lines would soon snap if he kept it up. I couldn't believe my eyes as I saw his bright snow white wings, and golden robe. "Hang on ill get some help!" I yelled out, looking around for nearby buildings.
We all know those tired clichés. It’s time to kill them. Take one of them and turn them on their heads or at least these will hopefully keep the errors out of your writing. If you think of any other way to change them up go right ahead.